This is for you to practice writing a story. Let's try to finish the following story.
One day, Ying-hung was playing with her pets near her house. Suddenly, something flew down from the sky. It was a small spaceship. It flew under a bush, and a little man came out.
One of her puppies ran towards the little man. It knocked him down. Ying-hung qickly rescued him from the puppy. She put him on a table. She looked after the little man. She brought him some food and water.
Then she went to tell her parents about the little man. But they laughed at her. They thought she was making up a story.
"But it's true," she said. "Come outside and I'll show you."
"That's enough!" said her father. "You must not argue with your parents. Now eat your dinner."
But Mr Chu was listening to the conversation outside the window. He decided to go and look. He went to the table behind the house. When he saw the little man, he picked him up in his hand, and took him back to his house.
"Now you belong to me!" said Mr Chu to the little man.
Ying-hung watched, but she could not do anything. She was very frightened of her cruel neighbour.
....... What's going to happen next? Complete the story below.
...Then the dogs follwed Mr.Chu and bit his legs.He fell to the pipe and die. A little man tranformed into Yin-hung's dad. Yin-hung was surprised and arked him "Why did you do that daddy".He said "It's my secret, actually we are from an alien planet".^^
ReplyDeleteNutcha Pitaksalee (Kratob) #5416680220
EL171 (Architecture)
The puppy barked her cruel neighbour and bit him. He fallen down on the ground, the smurf flew down from his hand. The puppy protected smurf from cruel neighbour by brought its into mouth. It enjoyed playing with smurf but smurf is a spy of CAT agency. After that smurf was bombed itself, the bomb destroyed everthing including Ying-hung.
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Maythisa Yenjit (Tum) 5416680188
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And then Ying-Hung Started to cry and scream out loud."What are you doing, What are you doing ?" said Ying-Hung. Meanwhile Ying-Hung is shouting, Mr.Chu went back to his house.
ReplyDelete"Ha-ha If I sent you to the new agency, think about it how much money will I get and I will be famous hahaha" said Mr.Chu
"Please don't hurt me." said the little man.
Mr.Kitrawee Rudeejaruswan
ID 5416680014
EL 171 (Architecture)
Sec 550001
Then Ying-Hung decided to went to Mr.Chu house to safe the little man with her partner the puppies. They ran very fast to Mr.Chu house and saw Mr.Chu trying to put the little man into the box.
Instantly they got in the house and the puppies bite Mr.Chu's hand
and free the little man. Ying- Hung quickly picked up the little man and came back to their home.
"Dad! Dad! here is the little man" said Ying-Hung, Dad turned his face to Yin-Hung to spoke to her dad saw the little man and said " sorry my dear that I don't trust you, What can I do for you little one ?". "Please fix my space ship" said The little man,
After dad had fixed the space ship.The little man said "Thank you."
and the ship took off.
Happy Ending. :]
Kitrawee Rudeejaruswan (Bomb)
Id : 5416680014
EL 171 sec 550001
....Yin-Hung follow her cruel neighbour . Mr.Chu took the littleman in the cage and calling to the news reporter. When Yin-Hung came to his house. the littleman shouting for help. She heard a voice from the kitchen. she walk gently to the cage and try to help him. she unlocked the cage and took him out of the house. then Mr. Chu saw that Yin-Hung try to stole his littleman. he try to catched her but her puppy bite at his leg, he got hurt. Yin-Hung took the littleman to her house sefely. the littleman thanks for her help. Before he went back to the planet. Yin-Hung called her dad to see the littleman. he was amazed that his doughter said was true. the littlemansay good bye and got into the space then flied away :))
ReplyDeleteChawin Poomngam (Aof)
ID:5416680030
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Mr.Chu very surprise when he got the little man.Then the little man come into the big man ! and Mr.Chu frighen when he saw the little man change to be Monster. !!! The Monster kick Mr.Chu go out frome the Earth.The Monster come into t he little man and he come back to Ying-hung again.
ReplyDeleteWarittha Mahawong
ID: 5416612348
EL 171 sec 550001
Mr.Chu took the little man into a cage. In the same time Ying-hung abserved that a small spaceship under the bush alarmed then she picked it up and move forward, it alarmed more and more when approched Mr Chu's house. So she called the police, they went to Mr. Chu's house and helped the little man. He was safe then Ying-hung father's appologised his daughter and feasted a dinner to the little man.
ReplyDeleteThanat Sitthammaporn
ID: 5416680279
EL 171 sec 550001
then she ran to her neighbour and took the sword from her back. suddenly, she cut his head and took the little man back to her house....
ReplyDeleteBut she was worried about a little man more than her danger.Ying-hung and her dogs were following Mr.Chu to his house.Suddenly Ying-hung's dogs ran into Mr.Chu. Them helped a little man came back to Ying-hung. Then Ying-hung and her dogs ran back to her home. They repaired spaceship together and sent a little man back to his home.
ReplyDeleteTanarob Nuangsart (Maping)
ID:5416680311
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Thitisa Sidarak(Noey)
ID:5416683117
EL 171 sec 550001
Suddenly her cruel neighbor who stole the little man fell down. already at that time both the man and the little man slid to the pool that is near Ying-hung’s house .
ReplyDeleteThe man couldn’t swim, He shouted “Help me, help me, I can’t swim”.
The girl heard the man, so she ran to the pool. Than she saw the little man was helping the man. The little man pull the man up easily from the water ,so she helped the little man to kept the man as far as he recovered. Next time the man better symptom ,he felt very sad about his performed and he said. “from now on I didn’t do like that ,I’m sorry”
Kanyarat Jindaloed
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EL171 sec550001
She ran back into the house and take a bottle that has a lots of marble. Then, she ran away from home. Her father shout “Where are you going !?” But she doesn’t mind anymore. She hurry to save the little man. In the end, she chases Mr.Chu and when she ran approach him, she picked one of her marble threw to him. “Ouch!! What’s that!?”, Mr.Chu screamed while the marble hit him. He raised hands both to touched his head. Finally, the little man fell to the ground. He was very angry and thought to turn back to hurt her.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly!! Mr.Popeye, who is super hero in this town, knows what is happened. So he ate spinach to add his power up and he fight with he won the fight. Eventually, Ying Hung can saves the little man and doesn’t forget to thanks Mr.Popeye for help her to do this role. Happy Ending !! :)
Nuttaporn Supasanti (Luknut)
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EL 171
sec.550001
Ying-Hung returned to his father, "somebody stole the little man" she said. His father looked out side and then he chased after the man. he snatched the little man and returned to his daughter. He apologized his daughter that he didn't believe her. Happy Ending !!
ReplyDeleteOrawan Sasaneeyakul
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EL171
Sec. 550001