Males and females are just the human. So both of them need four requisites which are foods, clothes, medicines and houses. As everyone know, males and females are different. In fact, they basically need the same things. They always choose the best thing for them such as they have delicious foods, they buy the most beautiful clothes and they try to make themself look good to anyone's sight. See!! they are the same.
There are two general genders, male and female. Male is gender of wellness, bravery, and intelligence. Another gender type is Female, which is a gender of politeness, sweetness, and beauty. Male and female both pretend to have a living equally in the society even if they are different in the role of gender. So I think male and female are not different in the way they live.
Male and female were born to be the partner because males are symbol of strong and females are symbol of tender.Therefore, someone say that males are opposite females but someone is not. So this essay will discuss about the similarities and differences between males and females.
I often hear about the first man(Adam) and woman(Eve). Why the types of gender are male and female.Someone told me that 'Males' came from Mars while 'Females' came from Venus. Certainly,both of them are such differences as physical and emotional.And,they also are such similarities as essential needs.If you don't want to know,you are fail.Come on!There are some similarities and differences between males and females.
Nationalities,religions,habitats,educations and occupations are some kinds of rules to separate the human, but the basic rule is gender. Gender ,male and female, are the main human identification . Apart from physiology there are many things like activities ,favors and aptitudes that they are similar and different.In this essay I will present the similarities and differences between male and female. -[[< TAK ID:5411590374 EL317 >]]-
Human have a gender with us from birth. We divide into two genders. First is male, Male is strong,born to be a leader and male is a silent type. Second is female, female is hard to understand,doing not mind,and having high imagination. Although male is the opposite gender of female but they have something similar and different.That I will present below. +[[W.L. ID: 5411570178 ]]+
Human is legally separated to be male and female because of civic duty and right that need diffent labor skill in each task such as the women need not to conscipt for the army service ,this rule was swt up based on physical difference between male and female. However,ther are not only difference but also similarities between them.I think that the most similarities is they both need happiness in their life so they create everything that make they are happy
Humans consist of two main genders, male and female. In each gender, they have both differences and similarity in their habit, personality, activity, and belief. Typically, their similarities are eating , sleeping , watching movies and differences of them are habit , body structure , occupation etc. In my essay will present the following. You know how are male and female similarities and differences?
Genders are sex. There are male and female. Male is a strong man. Female is a tender woman. Male and female usually live together as a "couple". Their sex are opposite ,but they can live with each other. Because, they have similarities in life such as eating ,sleeping ,exercising ,although their body structure and personality are different. Let's consider about them.
Male and female are the same? That’s impossible! First of all, if not consider about how to eat, sleep or most of common action, man and woman are different in many ways. Man is stronger and woman is more sensitive. This is how people think nowadays and won’t change easily. From now on I’m going to explain how different male and female are and, just in case, how similar.
It's a nice start. Is it that you will discuss only differences between men and women? The phrase "just in case" makes me feel like you will include some similarities in your essay along with the discussion of the differences. It would be better if you divide your talk info 2 sections.
Everything has symbol represent themselves ,like white means merit or good side and black means sin or bad side,to describe their acts and generalities.Male,symbol of strength, energetic,competition.And Female,symbol of elegance,gentle,emotion.Symbols represent only outstanding acts and generalities,but can't tell although details;in the same way,Male and Female not only have differences but also have similarities as the same.Then,I'll mention about differences and similarities between Male and Female in following paragraph.
Well.. I just wonder why you discuss different symbols in the first couple of sentences. There are also some sentences which should not be in the paragraph. It would have been better if you still discussed symbols which represent both sides and those representing similar attribute.
There's an old speech that is inside many people's thought. Male can do everything better than female does; he must be the leader of the family, he must work hard to earn money, and he must be the representative of the nation, etc. But in the present, female can be the leader of the country, can earn money by herself, and can do everything that male can do. The more time is variable, the more human's thought changes. Nowadays, both male and female are equally important persons in the social. So let's share the idea about similarities and differences between male and female.
When we classify people,we will devide by gender.Owing to similarities and differences between women and men,gender is classic and easy way to discriminating people. Differences are physiology like men are stronger than women or interest like most women are interested in cosmetic but men aren't. Similarities are eating, sleeping, etc. because we are human.
Human is separated to two genders, males and females. Males are gender of bravery. Most of males are strong and powerful. They don't worry too much about nonsensical matter. While, females are gender of sweetness. Most of females concern themselves with beauty. They like to make themselves good-looking. Females sometimes anxious about nonsensical matter. Mind of males and females are different so they act different. However, males and females have some similarlity. For example, they want to have a happy life. From now on, I will present about similarities and differences between males and females.
In my world,there are many living things such as human,animal and bacteria. They live peace together. They helping each other. Human consist of two genders. Two genders are male and female. Physiology and mentality of male and female are similar each other but there are some differences. In my opinion,I think there are some similarities and differences between male and female.
This world seperates the genders of humans is two genders "Male and Female". But the quality and the capability of two genders have similarities and differences. Most of males like sport,Mosts of female like beauty. But Both like eating also that they resemble the saying "In the similarity has the difference".Therefore,I mention how to similarities and differences between males and females.
Everything in this world is built to be in pairs,The human too.Male is pair off female because they have something that can be well compatible.Male is strong and patient gender while Female is gentle. there are somthing similar and there are something different but they can live together in this world. So this passage will talk about similarities and differences between male and female
In natural, there are two genders that made to be paired, male and female. We call who is a male, “men” and who is a female, “women”. We believed men are from Mars and women are from Venus. So, they have something different but sometimes they are all the same! Then, I will show you what a similarity and difference between male and female.
Male and female born to be fulfill each other. They have something that other not have. Even though they have something different, both of them are human so they need to the same thing food, clothes, residence and they have same living such as sleeping eating learning. Then this essay will present about similarity and difference of male and female.
I wonder why your friends and you have to bring in food, clothes, houses, etc. in the introduction. ^^ it's not really that related to the topic at all.
The most basic classification of human is gender. Male and female have many differences not only in genetics but also in physiology, habit, vision, natural ability, etc. For example, we believe that woman care more about communicating than men do and men mostly think about logic while women think about feelings. But they are not completely different. Both of them are human so male and female should have somethings similar. In this passage, I'll analyze some of similarity and differences of these two gender.
"He like playing computer game, but she love shopping" This is simple that male and female different. And there are a lot of things that similar or different about them, such as activities in each day, flavorite hobby etc. Why are they similar? Why are they different? Let's talk about this !!
How do you think about the similarities and differences between male and female. Strength and power are presented by male while sensitiveness and tender are presented by female. In the other side there are many similarities such as both of them want to make the relationship with each other. So there are many similarities between differences between male and female.
There are two genders in this world. First gender is male. Male has about ¼ of all people. I think they have too few. And second gender is female. Female has about ¾ of all people so you can see female everywhere you go. Male and female have many similarities but they have many difference too.
Well... the intro seems a little out of the topic. It would have been better if you could bring in general understandings about men and women, instead of the no. of each gender.
In one night, If you’re walking alone on the sidewalk. There is no one walking near you and no car on the road. Every shop you’re walking passed was closed. Just only the small street lamps are shining. Suddenly, a man you don’t know before are running to you. After that, he pull with force the bag you holding. How do you do continue? Running follow him and attempt to fight with him for getting back your bag with yourself are which you will do if you are a man. Shouting to someone to help you is the method you will use for getting back your bag if you are a woman. Right? Because of the different habits between male and female therefore they have different method. Male like to protect himself but female like to protected by another one. Although there are many differences between male and female, they have many similarities. It will be very interested if we talk about what’re differences and what’re similarities between male and female.
Interesting story. Very imaginative and creative indeed. Ummm... I think the end part is a bit out of the tone in your paragraph. Revise it and it will be a perfect intro.
In many nationality and religion believe that everything in the world made equilibrium by difference such as Yin-Yang, Hot-Cool, Dark-Light, Good-Bad. Even though, they are different, but they can use this make conformance as like as jigsaw because one thing has something but the other has something that the first thing has not. So in organism, we have male and female as different as Yin-Yang, in addition to, they have made many wonderful things for the world.
Since Human began in this world,the gender of human was classiflied in male and female.Of course,male and female were not be the same at all but I think there must have the similarities and differences between males and females such as idea,habit,ability or etc.
Good organization of idea, staring from something general to something more specific. Also, I understand that you will discuss mainly about the 3 categories in the last line, right?
Since Human began in this world,the gender of human was classiflied in male and female.Of course,male and female were not be the same at all but I think there must have the similarities and differences between males and females such as idea,habit,ability or etc.
God created creature to be couple in order to fulfill each other. In human, we have two gender "male" and "female".But how can we discriminate them ? Absolutely, the differences are not only physical but also characteristic, needs and mentality. However,in differences have some similarity. So, let's see the similarities and differences between males and females in these 3 points; characteristic, needs and mentality.
Vase with flowers always attract all of man sight. Vase without flowers is like a useless container,while flowers without vase are like the wayside things. In the same way, vase with flowers just like males and females. Men who live without women, their lives mean nothing. There is no inspiration to keep going on. On the other hand, women who live without men are unprotected from outside depression. So they always attract to each other. I think there are some reasons why they are and I found that because of similarities and differences between males and females. ##5411590432##
The issue of similarities and differences between males and females has been discussed for a long time, as well as, the rising equality of genders. However, someone argues that although, they are equal, they are somehow different in both physical and psychological terms. The similarities and differences will be pointed out and discussed in the following paragraphs.
The issue of similarities and differences between males and females has been discussed for a long time, as well as, the rising equality of genders. However, someone argues that although, they are equal, they are somehow different in both physical and psychological terms. The discussion on how different between males and females physical points will be shown first. Then, psychological aspects will be examined in this paper.
Note: Is it better than the last one or not? Is there anything should do to improve my intro.
Males and females are just the human. So both of them need four requisites which are foods, clothes, medicines and houses. As everyone know, males and females are different. In fact, they basically need the same things. They always choose the best thing for them such as they have delicious foods, they buy the most beautiful clothes and they try to make themself look good to anyone's sight. See!! they are the same.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good paragraph, but how can the story be continued? It seems that the paragraph is just done as it is.
DeleteThere are two general genders, male and female. Male is gender of wellness, bravery, and intelligence. Another gender type is Female, which is a gender of politeness, sweetness, and beauty. Male and female both pretend to have a living equally in the society even if they are different in the role of gender. So I think male and female are not different in the way they live.
ReplyDeleteThis is interesting. Will I only see similar attributes between men and women in your essay?
DeleteMale and female were born to be the partner because males are symbol of strong and females are symbol of tender.Therefore, someone say that males are opposite females but someone is not. So this essay will discuss about the similarities and differences between males and females.
ReplyDeleteThis is quite good! I'll love follow the rest of your essay.
DeleteI often hear about the first man(Adam) and woman(Eve). Why the types of gender are male and female.Someone told me that 'Males' came from Mars while 'Females' came from Venus. Certainly,both of them are such differences as physical and emotional.And,they also are such similarities as essential needs.If you don't want to know,you are fail.Come on!There are some similarities and differences between males and females.
ReplyDeleteGood start, but a little less formal in the end. It would have been a better start if the last 3 sentences were adapted a little more formal.
DeleteNationalities,religions,habitats,educations and occupations are some kinds of rules to separate the human, but the basic rule is gender. Gender ,male and female, are the main human identification . Apart from physiology there are many things like activities ,favors and aptitudes that they are similar and different.In this essay I will present the similarities and differences between male and female.
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Interesting, but I'm not quite sure if you are going to discuss activities, favors and apitutdes between men and women in your essay. ^^
DeleteHuman have a gender with us from birth. We divide into two genders. First is male, Male is strong,born to be a leader and male is a silent type. Second is female, female is hard to understand,doing not mind,and having high imagination. Although male is the opposite gender of female but they have something similar and different.That I will present below.
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It's a nice start, but how would you develop the rest of your essay?
DeleteHuman is legally separated to be male and female because of civic duty and right that need diffent labor skill in each task such as the women need not to conscipt for the army service ,this rule was swt up based on physical difference between male and female. However,ther are not only difference but also similarities between them.I think that the most similarities is they both need happiness in their life so they create everything that make they are happy
ReplyDeleteGood start, but is it that you will discuss happiness between men and women in your essay?
DeleteHumans consist of two main genders, male and female. In each gender, they have both differences and similarity in their habit, personality, activity, and belief. Typically, their similarities are eating , sleeping , watching movies and differences of them are habit , body structure , occupation etc. In my essay will present the following. You know how are male and female similarities and differences?
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Well... I'm not sure what sort of similarities and differences you will develop in your essay.
DeleteGenders are sex. There are male and female. Male is a strong man. Female is a tender woman. Male and female usually live together as a "couple". Their sex are opposite ,but they can live with each other. Because, they have similarities in life such as eating ,sleeping ,exercising ,although their body structure and personality are different. Let's consider about them.
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It is a nice start. The last sentence is a littl more like talking. It would have been better if it's changed to a bit more formal.
DeleteMale and female are the same? That’s impossible! First of all, if not consider about how to eat, sleep or most of common action, man and woman are different in many ways. Man is stronger and woman is more sensitive. This is how people think nowadays and won’t change easily. From now on I’m going to explain how different male and female are and, just in case, how similar.
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It's a nice start. Is it that you will discuss only differences between men and women? The phrase "just in case" makes me feel like you will include some similarities in your essay along with the discussion of the differences. It would be better if you divide your talk info 2 sections.
DeleteEverything has symbol represent themselves ,like white means merit or good side and black means sin or bad side,to describe their acts and generalities.Male,symbol of strength, energetic,competition.And Female,symbol of elegance,gentle,emotion.Symbols represent only outstanding acts and generalities,but can't tell although details;in the same way,Male and Female not only have differences but also have similarities as the same.Then,I'll mention about differences and similarities between Male and Female in following paragraph.
ReplyDeleteWell.. I just wonder why you discuss different symbols in the first couple of sentences. There are also some sentences which should not be in the paragraph. It would have been better if you still discussed symbols which represent both sides and those representing similar attribute.
DeleteThere's an old speech that is inside many people's thought. Male can do everything better than female does; he must be the leader of the family, he must work hard to earn money, and he must be the representative of the nation, etc. But in the present, female can be the leader of the country, can earn money by herself, and can do everything that male can do. The more time is variable, the more human's thought changes. Nowadays, both male and female are equally important persons in the social. So let's share the idea about similarities and differences between male and female.
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I love your paragraph. But let's not use "let's" in the last sentence. ^^
DeleteWhen we classify people,we will devide by gender.Owing to similarities and differences between women and men,gender is classic and easy way to discriminating people. Differences are physiology like men are stronger than women or interest like most women are interested in cosmetic but men aren't. Similarities are eating, sleeping, etc. because we are human.
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Is that it? What will the rest of your essay be like? ^^
DeleteHuman is separated to two genders, males and females. Males are gender of bravery. Most of males are strong and powerful. They don't worry too much about nonsensical matter. While, females are gender of sweetness. Most of females concern themselves with beauty. They like to make themselves good-looking. Females sometimes anxious about nonsensical matter. Mind of males and females are different so they act different. However, males and females have some similarlity. For example, they want to have a happy life. From now on, I will present about similarities and differences between males and females.
ReplyDeleteNice start and good to bring arguments into discussion.
DeleteIn my world,there are many living things such as human,animal and bacteria. They live peace together. They helping each other. Human consist of two genders. Two genders are male and female. Physiology and mentality of male and female are similar each other but there are some differences. In my opinion,I think there are some similarities and differences between male and female.
ReplyDeleteWell, I personally think that your arguments change so suddenly from one point to another. I believe you can make it more smoothly.
DeleteThis world seperates the genders of humans is two genders "Male and Female". But the quality and the capability of two genders have similarities and differences. Most of males like sport,Mosts of female like beauty. But Both like eating also that they resemble the saying "In the similarity has the difference".Therefore,I mention how to similarities and differences between males and females.
ReplyDeleteNo.5411590069 ka ^^
DeleteWell... the points discussed in your paragraph are a bit confusing. Nice try.
DeleteEverything in this world is built to be in pairs,The human too.Male is pair off female because they have something that can be well compatible.Male is strong and patient gender while Female is gentle. there are somthing similar and there are something different but they can live together in this world. So this passage will talk about similarities and differences between male and female
ReplyDeleteThat's nice. I love your paragraph.
DeleteIn natural, there are two genders that made to be paired, male and female. We call who is a male, “men” and who is a female, “women”. We believed men are from Mars and women are from Venus. So, they have something different but sometimes they are all the same! Then, I will show you what a similarity and difference between male and female.
ReplyDeleteNice paragraph. Good to bring in good sayings in your paragraph.
DeleteMale and female born to be fulfill each other. They have something that other not have. Even though they have something different, both of them are human so they need to the same thing food, clothes, residence and they have same living such as sleeping eating learning. Then this essay will present about similarity and difference of male and female.
ReplyDeleteI wonder why your friends and you have to bring in food, clothes, houses, etc. in the introduction. ^^ it's not really that related to the topic at all.
DeleteThat looks romantic at first.^^ Human need again???
DeleteThe most basic classification of human is gender. Male and female have many differences not only in genetics but also in physiology, habit, vision, natural ability, etc. For example, we believe that woman care more about communicating than men do and men mostly think about logic while women think about feelings. But they are not completely different. Both of them are human so male and female should have somethings similar. In this passage, I'll analyze some of similarity and differences of these two gender.
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I suspect the rest of your essay will be scientific-like writing, right?
Delete"He like playing computer game, but she love shopping"
ReplyDeleteThis is simple that male and female different.
And there are a lot of things that similar or different
about them, such as activities in each day, flavorite hobby etc. Why are they similar? Why are they different?
Let's talk about this !!
Nice try... More like selling or advertising your idea.
DeleteHow do you think about the similarities and differences between male and female. Strength and power are presented by male while sensitiveness and tender are presented by female. In the other side there are many similarities such as both of them want to make the relationship with each other. So there are many similarities between differences between male and female.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the perfect introductions in the list. Gorgeous!
DeleteThere are two genders in this world. First gender is male. Male has about ¼ of all people. I think they have too few. And second gender is female. Female has about ¾ of all people so you can see female everywhere you go. Male and female have many similarities but they have many difference too.
ReplyDeleteWell... the intro seems a little out of the topic. It would have been better if you could bring in general understandings about men and women, instead of the no. of each gender.
DeleteIn one night, If you’re walking alone on the sidewalk. There is no one walking near you and no car on the road. Every shop you’re walking passed was closed. Just only the small street lamps are shining. Suddenly, a man you don’t know before are running to you. After that, he pull with force the bag you holding. How do you do continue? Running follow him and attempt to fight with him for getting back your bag with yourself are which you will do if you are a man. Shouting to someone to help you is the method you will use for getting back your bag if you are a woman. Right? Because of the different habits between male and female therefore they have different method. Male like to protect himself but female like to protected by another one. Although there are many differences between male and female, they have many similarities. It will be very interested if we talk about what’re differences and what’re similarities between male and female.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story. Very imaginative and creative indeed. Ummm... I think the end part is a bit out of the tone in your paragraph. Revise it and it will be a perfect intro.
DeleteIn many nationality and religion believe that everything in the world made equilibrium by difference such as Yin-Yang, Hot-Cool, Dark-Light, Good-Bad. Even though, they are different, but they can use this make conformance as like as jigsaw because one thing has something but the other has something that the first thing has not. So in organism, we have male and female as different as Yin-Yang, in addition to, they have made many wonderful things for the world.
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Good to bring in general concept and discuss it in a nice way. I'd love to see your essay in more detail soon.
DeleteSince Human began in this world,the gender of human was classiflied in male and female.Of course,male and female were not be the same at all but I think there must have the similarities and differences between males and females such as idea,habit,ability or etc.
ReplyDeleteGood organization of idea, staring from something general to something more specific. Also, I understand that you will discuss mainly about the 3 categories in the last line, right?
DeleteSince Human began in this world,the gender of human was classiflied in male and female.Of course,male and female were not be the same at all but I think there must have the similarities and differences between males and females such as idea,habit,ability or etc.
ReplyDeleteGod created creature to be couple in order to fulfill each other. In human, we have two gender "male" and "female".But how can we discriminate them ? Absolutely, the differences are not only physical but also characteristic, needs and mentality. However,in differences have some similarity. So, let's see the similarities and differences between males and females in these 3 points; characteristic, needs and mentality.
ReplyDeleteQuite nice to bring in 3 areas of discussion into your writing.
DeleteVase with flowers always attract all of man sight. Vase without flowers is like a useless container,while flowers without vase are like the wayside things. In the same way, vase with flowers just like males and females. Men who live without women, their lives mean nothing. There is no inspiration to keep going on. On the other hand, women who live without men are unprotected from outside depression. So they always attract to each other. I think there are some reasons why they are and I found that because of similarities and differences between males and females.
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It's such a lovely analogy. I'd love to see more stories in the rest of your essay.
DeleteThe issue of similarities and differences between males and females has been discussed for a long time, as well as, the rising equality of genders. However, someone argues that although, they are equal, they are somehow different in both physical and psychological terms. The similarities and differences will be pointed out and discussed in the following paragraphs.
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This is quite good. But, it should have been better if there were some points listed in the last sentences to discuss in detail later.
DeleteThe issue of similarities and differences between males and females has been discussed for a long time, as well as, the rising equality of genders. However, someone argues that although, they are equal, they are somehow different in both physical and psychological terms. The discussion on how different between males and females physical points will be shown first. Then, psychological aspects will be examined in this paper.
DeleteNote: Is it better than the last one or not? Is there anything should do to improve my intro.
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This is getting better now. Quite good improvement, indeed.
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